rad World
I am 1400' under
the waves
crawling through tubular steel tendrils
wrapped full circle in my claws
pressed to my mechanical motors
driving me inward
I am driven to be outward
bound
ensconced in blue marvels
barracudas wait at the surface
I dare not rise
for in these depths I am safe
amidst the danger of gases men have died for
I live here
foundering with lead laid to waist
I float here
exhaling noxious notions
I bloat here
with a swelling
telling
yelling in my ear
all stop
command has taken over the dive
relinquish and surface
under these waters
I am alive
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I wish I could dwell in the deep abyss!
Beautiful poem and such deep meaning
It's a completely different world under the water...completely. Why Do Animals' Eyes Glow In The Dark? : NPR::
Nov 1, 2008 Only could be seen a pair of eyes gleaming like live coals. Well, thanks so much for clearing these things up for us.
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living by the ocean at one time in my life i do know what it is like to see the bottom. but not like you.
Dark blue is a rich and wonderful color that is perhaps why..
or perhaps it the color of when I am really mad.. my eye?
I do not know why you like dark blue
But I like your poem .. I really do.
If you surface you will have to face the music
Hydropro, I must confess, my first reading of this, I found it to be dark. After reading it again, I have changed my mind, for if you are alive there in the dark, then, there is Light, indeed. Sorry I am so dense.
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Interesting poetry. In the deep blue you seem to sense peace and tranquility and become part of the surrounding. Your physical body melts into this atmosphere and your words relate to us the experience which would for the most part, scare the daylights out of us. Under the waters you are alive!
Very reminiscent in style to some of the work of Poe. I liked it.
Your own private Atlantis mysterious, caverns so deep I would fear to thread their beauty, thankful for the photography we are gifted to view.
Lovely poem, Kudos
Hey......good one Hydro...
I didn't know that you went down under...
Kool!!!
It must be very peaceful down there...
I can only dream.
A classic . . . that goes with the avatar.
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Why do I like dark blue so much? 
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